The sexism: an actuality university problem
The sexism
it is a very important actually topic, in all the last century we see how the
woman taken to the streets, the public space demand equality and freedom,
creating a great movement in all the world. Today this movement still exist and
it have a very kind of wins, but the sexism it is part of the problems that
still exist.
In the
world the woman experience many kinds of discrimination, this discrimination
have in the first, second and third world, with different scale. For example
the woman in have the stigma that how she have the kids she are only the
responsible to the be care of the children, in a many parts of the planet, even
Europe and America, the woman has a discrimination in his salary a difference
to the men only for his sex.
In Chile
it´s not very different, on the contrary, the male chauvinist is in our
culture. This is how in this faculty we
see how, for example, there are a different number of teachers and researcher
women and men. Also in the faculty of history, the last time we see how the
case of sexism and sexual harassment emerge with a two or three teachers and
woman students and the worst it is that the university doesn´t take the request
of this topic and the action of teacher and specially students, get that one
teacher was expelled.
Finally we can
see how the sexism happen in our modern times and how even happen in our university,
the woman teacher of history claim that are discriminate for the men teachers and
cannot develop. That it is a very important problem and the teaching group, the
university directorial, students and all the society have to work in change this,
how a public university and maybe the most important university of the country
we have to work to change the problems of the society and for that we have to
need to star with home.
That´s all
friends I hope you find interesting this and information valuable.
Good bye
Marcos,
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The sexism: (an actuality) A CURRENT university problem
(The) sexism (it) is a very important (actually) CURRENT topic, in all the last century we HAVE seeN how (the woman) WOMEN taken (to) the streets?, the public spaceS demandING equality
…Today this movement still existS and it (have a very kind of wins) UNCLEAR
… but (the) sexism (it) is part of the problems that still exist.
…this discrimination (have) HAS? EXISTS? in the first, second and third world, with different scaleS. For example (the woman) WOMEN (in) have the stigma that (how) AS (she) THEY have the kids (she) THEY are (only the) responsible (to) FOR the (be) care of the children ALONE, in
…(a: SINGULAR)many part(s: PLURAL) of the planet, even Europe and America, (the woman) WOMEN (has a) SUFFER FROM?? discrimination in (his) THEIR salary a difference to the men only for his sex.?? UNCLEAR
… there are (a) different number of 1)women and men 2)teachers and researcherS.
.…the last time we (see) SAW how the case of sexism and sexual harassment emergeD with (a) two or three teachers and womEan students and the worst (it) is that the university doesn´t take the [request of this topic and action of teacher and specially students] TO get that one teacher (was expelled).
Finally we can see how (the) sexism happenS in our modern times and how IT even happenS in our university, (the) womEan teacherS of history claim that THEY are discriminateD (for) BY (the) men teachers and cannot develop. That it is a very important problem and the teaching group, the university directorS(ial), students and all the society have to work TO (in) change this,
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