Hello my dear friends. I´m going to continuous with my history....
When we passed to Argentina we found a beautiful scene, the pampa Argentina it is wonderful. We arrived to Zapala a small city but very beautiful and quiet place. We stayed there one night and the morning we went to Neuquen, the provincial capital.
In there we went to Zanon industry, this is a industy with worker´s control.
In there we know the industry, the manufacture, but the most important, we know the people and his sacrifice and hope. It was a great experiencie.
hi marcos! those are great and beautiful places.. :)
ResponderEliminarTHANKS SAVKA, I hope see you soon
EliminarMarcos,
ResponderEliminarWC: 224, considering both texts… You really need to edit your text in a much better way. Too many mistakes make it difficult for the reader. Please, check the following:
…(How do you Know) AS YOU KNOW I am from Linares (city), so when I finished ( the) college I went there.
In there I went to the mountainS and next I went to Concepción (city).
…In there we went to (go) THE cinema and THE beach. In there I (eat) ATE a lot of seafood and fish.
Next I cAme back to Linares and
…We arrived (to) IN Victoria (city)…
…when we lunch dinner….??? WHERE WE HAD DINNER OR WHERE WE HAD LUNCH
… Next we continueD towards the border …
…the pampa Argentina (it) is wonderful. We arrived (to) IN Zapala(,) a 1)small 3) city 2)but very beautiful and A quiet place.
…this is a industRy with workerS´(s) control.
In there we knEow the industry, the manufacture, but the most important, we knEow the people and his THEIR sacrifice and hope. It was a great experience(i)e.
Cheers,